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| Author: | euthanasia1000 [ Tue Apr 13, 2004 8:22 pm ] |
| Post subject: | None of you would allow an animal to suffer so |
Here I sit alone at heart My soul twisted and agonized My mind on fire with perceptions real and maybe unreal The burden of life has become to much for me Its weight does crush my spine None of you would allow an animal to suffer so Would not one, just one friend step forward and put an end to my misery that is life? I pray a hundred times each day that my next breath will be my last The answer has yet to be yea for after each prayer my lungs do fill again |
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| Author: | Hermskii [ Tue Apr 13, 2004 8:47 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Hmmm? |
You misspelled the word "to" in the fourth line and is that supposed to be a "yes" instead of "yea" in the last line? What is this poem saying? Maybe that if you keep praying that you won't die since your lungs fill again after each prayer or is it that you want to die really and your bummed that the one thing that doesn't fail you is the one thing that keeps you alive? What? What are you saying with this poem??? Oh yeah....welcome to the forum. We hope you enjoy your stay. |
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| Author: | euthanasia1000 [ Tue Apr 13, 2004 9:27 pm ] |
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You are quick to not the grammar errors and yet you still credit me with a poem that is not. I almost smiled. Where is Dr. C when needed? |
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| Author: | Mahatma [ Tue Apr 13, 2004 10:31 pm ] |
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A Counter Poem for Youth in Asia Here I sit alone and fart My hole fisted and agonized My ass on fire with unreal tournament And spicy burritos. I keep yelling "monsterbone" And yet my spine is not the victim But my ass. I know all the old-timers, And am a prized member of the SRA community? What skanky name issues yet from your lungs? Humbly, Mahatma! |
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| Author: | ThE OnE [ Wed Apr 14, 2004 9:23 am ] |
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Meet us in the arena and we can end it in a barrage of missles with respect of course 8) |
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| Author: | Lotus [ Wed Apr 14, 2004 8:01 pm ] |
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mmmmmmmmmmmm..........yeah.....nice meeting you too! Lotus :twisted: :twisted: |
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